Fantasy Girl

I lay my pencil to the porous page, and let my lunatic indulge itself.

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azIthinkIiz
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Fantasy Girl

Postby azIthinkIiz » Sat Feb 13, 2016 11:26 pm

Okay, I don't like seeing a whole entire section of this forum empty so I'll upload a song some buddies and I just made for fun.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DNSoIcOOnIA

Carry on with your day. :D

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Re: Fantasy Girl

Postby Jelger » Tue Feb 16, 2016 6:14 am

That was actually pretty cool. I liked the atmosphere. The only thing it lacked for me was some sort of real pay-off, a change in the song that surprised me somewhere near the bridge or end. Now it sort of runs for five minutes and it slowly fades to the background for me :)

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Re: Fantasy Girl

Postby azIthinkIiz » Fri Feb 19, 2016 6:03 pm

Jelger wrote:That was actually pretty cool. I liked the atmosphere. The only thing it lacked for me was some sort of real pay-off, a change in the song that surprised me somewhere near the bridge or end. Now it sort of runs for five minutes and it slowly fades to the background for me :)


Thanks man! Definitely good notes. Song would've benefitted for sure if we worked on the structure a bit more

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Re: Fantasy Girl

Postby Jelger » Sat Feb 20, 2016 4:34 am

I only listened to it once, so don't take my comments to serious :)

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Re: Fantasy Girl

Postby BeccaWilsonxx » Thu Feb 25, 2016 12:17 am

azlthinkliz I enjoyed it! But I have to agree with Jelger. Overall, I thought it was very relaxing. Do you have anymore material? Thanks for sharing.

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Re: Fantasy Girl

Postby eclecticmuso12 » Fri Apr 14, 2017 1:19 am

I like it man, it's very chill and relaxing, but I do echo the sentiments others have expressed, definitely keep it up though man, I'm a songwriter/musician also so I know how difficult it is... I subbed to you anyway, hope it helps!


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